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This story was predictable but, it was creative in design and art. The beast looked cool and properly beast-like. The little girl reminds me of babette from skyrim. just an innocent little girl until you turn your back or let your guard down then stab, you're dead. the voice acting was perfect for the tone of the flash. I commend you and hope to see more in the future.

interesting. The only reason I give you 4.5 is cause you got lazy at the end. You made the alien mine nothing for like 3 seconds.

Joofville responds:

Yeah you're right. I must stop being lazy.

i liked this. I really wish that these were longer. I also think that if this got bigger it would be awesome if you had a narrator.

buriedantenna responds:

Good to hear you liked it :) Longer running times and audio narration are excellent suggestions, I plan to bring both to future episodes.

great.

well, you're getting there. It seems like you spent a lot of time stalling with certain frames and that you didn't really put a bunch of effort into the fore or background. You just need practice and then I'm sure you can make it to a daily someday.

JaneyKara responds:

Thank you!

This is my first time animating with Flash in a while, so I didn't really know what to do. I surprised myself by making this! D:

I'll put more effort into future animations, but this one I just made for fun. I suppose that's why I didn't put much effort into it. But like I said, more effort will be put into future uploads. ^_^

Okay. If you make another intro make sure to include less text and more animations. You're reasons were fighting stickdudes and a hazy shaking face for a total time of like 6 seconds. This doesn't convince me to sub you. srry. I will give you benifit of the doubt and give you 2.5 stars for the stick fighting.

Very strange. The voice acting was barley understandable and the animation quality was very poor. If you spend a bit more time animating you will learn how to do stuff. I hope you get better because honestly right now it is pretty bad.

?????!!! I am so confused. I understand slender man killing him but, it's so short and makes no sense. I'll give you one star because this actually took some ounce of effort.

seems unfinished. If you go back and polish this maybe find a voice actor for the main character and even a narrator then you could probably turn this into something. Also fix the poke ball it was WAY to big. Other than that I would love to see you finish this and give back the final video. If you do I will gladly watch it.

FleetAdmiralTony responds:

thanks for the full review man :D :D :D

Really. If you're going to submit something you might as well do well... something at all. I don't really even see the point. It doesn't invoke anger it just makes me sit here and facepalm myself at how pointless even making this was. I saw go animate and was like of god but, then you did nothing at all. So bye bye video.

Greasegoat responds:

Thanks you for your review!!

Hey I've been a part of Ng for a while. At least a few years now. I tend to look at the art and play games on NG and I have recently taken up digital art and plan to upload every once in a while.

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