Grphan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Little Walking Man]

I know all of the jokes come from yelling and absolute randomnes but, it still made me laugh. your art is pretty good though you did use that walk animation to take up most of the time. at least you didn't reuse the background. I kinda wish there was more story to this random guy. Anyways good animation I want to see more from you so have my sub. TAKE IT.

[Nerd Rage]

Well honestly the thing I noticed in your animation first was the fact that you have a lot of repetition. You constantly seem to be reusing the eye and nose shot which is fine but, it makes it seem almost "lazy"? I dunno. Anyways the joke is kinda funny but, it's delivered in such a drawn out way that takes away a lot of the actual humor of the whole animation. I don't think you did too badly. I hope that you continue to improve and make better animations as you further your career as an artist.

[American Alligator]

I think that I would rather watch this than just about anything on cartoon network. The quality is better, the jokes are about the same in trend but the characters are really interesting. I really want to know more about how these two came to be. I hope that you make more like this. Please!

[Game Grumps - Bullshit Lu]

You did good but, I feel like you repeated a lot of the same stuff, but that's not really your fault. Anyways it's about a good a some other game grumps animated out there so good job. I took off points for smoothness and some for unoriginality.

[The date]

I liked the art style and the twist. It was really good and decently long as well. Overall a good flash. This will probably make it to the front page.

[Cheapshot Episode 0.1]

I really like the art and the characters are great. Now this next part may sound harsh but, is there any possible way to increase the audio quality of the elf rogue? She sounds like she recorded with a toaster. Otherwise I love everything else about this flash. I love the speed potion on the blacksmith (I have something to talk to you about involving that I'll PM you.) Also the animations for the traps and lock breaking was really cool. I also like most of the characters in this. I need to see the rest of your series.

VerticalCircus responds:

Thank you so much for your support. It means alot.
Yes, the recording conditions for Cheapshot (the halfling character) were not ideal on the day and the second pass we did a month or so later just didn't have the same energy. Also it had been animated to this audio making ADR hard to get right. Especially as we're newbies to all this.
The point is that this is only the first. Everything will get better with time and practice.
Feel free to shoot a message this way, whenever. :)

[Catching a Bus]

A nice animation. It's not really anything though. It's kind of a slice of life flash so I dunno I feel like that takes a little away. Also the fact that there was no sound kinda bothered me for some reason. Sorry I took .5 off for the type of flash and another .25 off for lack of sound and 0.25 off for overall quality. Still all in all a decent flash.

[What Are Cats Thinking?]

Other than it being short this flash is almost perfect. It made me laugh but, if you want it to do well on Ng you should make sure it's at least 20 seconds or so. Anyways good job.

[Internet Down]

A lot of screaming and random things but, honestly it was all ok. My favorite part was actually the disclaimer. MMMM angry choclate. You can feel the anger. Good animation though, I plan to watch you in the future.

themisterholliday responds:

Glad you liked it! I'll try and continue to provide quality content.