Grphan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[For Emergencies Only]

seems unfinished. If you go back and polish this maybe find a voice actor for the main character and even a narrator then you could probably turn this into something. Also fix the poke ball it was WAY to big. Other than that I would love to see you finish this and give back the final video. If you do I will gladly watch it.

FleetAdmiralTony responds:

thanks for the full review man :D :D :D

[Created Using GoAnimate!]

Really. If you're going to submit something you might as well do well... something at all. I don't really even see the point. It doesn't invoke anger it just makes me sit here and facepalm myself at how pointless even making this was. I saw go animate and was like of god but, then you did nothing at all. So bye bye video.

Greasegoat responds:

Thanks you for your review!!

[Be Happy]

Was really interesting. I was a little bummed at how short it was and was also dissapointed in how ending was kinda confusing compared to the rest of the video. It was good music and the animation quality was nice. You could have spent less time with the octopus thing walking and such but, It's a nice little clip.

hillrdavid responds:

It began with basically just a walk cycle. I kept on just adding stuff and making things up until I ended up with this.

[YouTube Subbers]

well it needs to be developed more fully. The backround looks sloppy and I just can't see this on NG srry.

GabrielLoganStudios responds:

It's ok, it wasn't perfect I know. The next thing I DO release though will be better.

[can]

it was a meh flash. Some cool effects but, not intresting. There isn't any story and it just plays a 35 second loop.

VioletVulpine responds:

doesnt need story.

[An Ad for Newgrounds]

meh, It's an okay commercial but, it seems to have little less flow than it needs. Other than that everything was fine.

VioletVulpine responds:

Thacks.

[game preview]

well from what i see you are doing a base defense game but, it looks decent. add upgrades if you haven't already and if you can make sure you have more than one enemy and if you want an ending. the reason being everyone likes an ending. (with that said add a story to the game).

wash responds:

the game has all those things in its finished version. I havent been able to post the game here because the controls get sticky with the adds or for some reason, but you can play it in the link on the coment