Grphan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Game]

I really like this. I wish you made it a little louder though. I had to turn my volume all the way up just to hear. I love a lot of the jokes that you made in this and also I love that the main character sounded like bane. It made me laugh. Your escapist art style also suites this animation.

MCBillyin responds:

Thanks for the review! I do admit, the audio mixing could have been better. I'll be sure not to make the same mistake next time.

[Avatar: Last Hairbender]

I like korra but, this animation was pretty good. Only took off .5 for two reasons. first, you seemed all over the place in this animation which kinda took away from the humor IMO. 2nd I like korra (you didn't lose anything for that tho cause that would be fanboy bs.). Also what is with you weird fetish for your hair? I just don't get it.

WooleyWorld responds:

I have hair jokes to make and people laugh so i make them. When people dont laugh ill stop making them. What do you mean all over the place?

[Cheapshot Episode 0.1]

I really like the art and the characters are great. Now this next part may sound harsh but, is there any possible way to increase the audio quality of the elf rogue? She sounds like she recorded with a toaster. Otherwise I love everything else about this flash. I love the speed potion on the blacksmith (I have something to talk to you about involving that I'll PM you.) Also the animations for the traps and lock breaking was really cool. I also like most of the characters in this. I need to see the rest of your series.

VerticalCircus responds:

Thank you so much for your support. It means alot.
Yes, the recording conditions for Cheapshot (the halfling character) were not ideal on the day and the second pass we did a month or so later just didn't have the same energy. Also it had been animated to this audio making ADR hard to get right. Especially as we're newbies to all this.
The point is that this is only the first. Everything will get better with time and practice.
Feel free to shoot a message this way, whenever. :)

[Making a scene]

As a tutorial video this is good. It's also a good awareness video showing just how hard it is just to make a simple animation. I applaud your efforts.

HMarioProductionsH responds:

Thank you friend for the great review

[Internet Down]

A lot of screaming and random things but, honestly it was all ok. My favorite part was actually the disclaimer. MMMM angry choclate. You can feel the anger. Good animation though, I plan to watch you in the future.

themisterholliday responds:

Glad you liked it! I'll try and continue to provide quality content.

[Greg Sends An Email]

Not bad, but I had to go to the discription for context. You should be able to convey this within the story. Otherwise it was kinda confusing as to why greg all of the sudden just started spazzing out instead of just sending the message. The big problem was that this was extremely drug out and seemed to take way too long for just this little thing.

amuezy responds:

Thank you for the feedback. A little context, this animation was for my Animation 20 exam. We were to have a video of at least a minute in length ( something wich I only learned after I submitted my storyboard) so I had to stretch every scene a little longer than I would have liked. so yeah definitely longer than it should have been.

[it's just a mask???]

Not terrible ,but I kinda wish that his arms weren't just dead logs as tells her to chill. Otherwise this joke is kinda dead. Like I said though it's definitely not bad. 3/5

Megacharlie responds:

Thanks :D

[Strange Minecraft Tales 1]

interesting. The only reason I give you 4.5 is cause you got lazy at the end. You made the alien mine nothing for like 3 seconds.

Joofville responds:

Yeah you're right. I must stop being lazy.

[ARCIS Sevetrin Descent E4]

i liked this. I really wish that these were longer. I also think that if this got bigger it would be awesome if you had a narrator.

buriedantenna responds:

Good to hear you liked it :) Longer running times and audio narration are excellent suggestions, I plan to bring both to future episodes.

[Emerson and the Box]

well, you're getting there. It seems like you spent a lot of time stalling with certain frames and that you didn't really put a bunch of effort into the fore or background. You just need practice and then I'm sure you can make it to a daily someday.

JaneyKara responds:

Thank you!

This is my first time animating with Flash in a while, so I didn't really know what to do. I surprised myself by making this! D:

I'll put more effort into future animations, but this one I just made for fun. I suppose that's why I didn't put much effort into it. But like I said, more effort will be put into future uploads. ^_^